…lessons in-line and are not bullet points of information. I find them fun to write and fun to read. So, I’m not sure if I’m a shitty storyteller or it just doesn’t work as a concept, but my stats are also very low for such articles. Here are some examples:
I think it's your headlines on these, my friends. They don't give the reader a clear sense of the benefit of the article.
For great examples of headlines to story articles, check out Benjamin Sledge. He writes stories with mental health lessons packaged in very beautiful stories.