I think it's your headlines on these, my friends. They don't give the reader a clear sense of the benefit of the article.

For great examples of headlines to story articles, check out Benjamin Sledge. He writes stories with mental health lessons packaged in very beautiful stories.

Get the Medium app

A button that says 'Download on the App Store', and if clicked it will lead you to the iOS App store
A button that says 'Get it on, Google Play', and if clicked it will lead you to the Google Play store